man i think it looks great i like ur style my one dose not look all that perfect but its the way i like my art to look..keep it up dude but can we write signs and shit or dose it have to be a creative background?
Cool! But there are some things to fix imo: Her badange at her hands whichs on the ground is too white and too long! It should be a lil bit more dirty. her eyes looks strange... They look too angular and I would make the pupils more visable. And I would make the feathers of the arrow more visable! AND i WOULD REMOVE THE SQUARE ENIX/DEVART sign below. huh, thats pretty much critic, he? hope you are not insulted by it.... I just wanna held ya! The pose at all is great by the way!! What about adding a background?